Another bit of usage.

  • Another bit of usage.

    I would have posted this in the previous thread but it wouldn't let me reply. Kept on saying access was denied and I needed to log in even though it showed me logged in as Oboe :P

    Anyway, on page 8 of the Magic and Martial Arts supplement it says, "thus allowing even thought, and voice, and song, and
    even dream, to have a sublime affect". I feel this is one to many "even"s.
    I AM Belligero the Clown so don't EFF with ME buddy!!

  • RE: Another bit of usage.

    The previous thread has been closed (the specific item fixed), so its actually better that you started a new thread, since the old ones fixed under spelling and grammar will be deleted eventually, as each one gets fixed by me.

    As to your concern with the extra "even",..I agree, and furthermore felt that there were too many "and"s as well. I actually chose to rewrite the sentence slighty, as follows:

    Those who practice ritual magic eventually come to the understanding that such magics work because all things in existence are interconnected in various ways, thus allowing one’s thought, voice, song, and even dreams, to have a sublime affect on the physical and spiritual aspects of the world around us.

    Thanks!

    Scottie ^^